Friday, August 14, 2009

Here is some more...

(Note: All characters are fictional, etc., etc.,)

The Legend of C.J.

Chapter 1, Part 2:

Of Mice and Corvettes.

C.J.'s Corvette sped down Virginia Avenue while being chased by three of Reno's finest. Inside the car, C.J. was arguing with a voice coming from a speaker on the dashboard.

"DAMMIT! I thought you had a escape route planned out for me." C.J. yelled as he was trying to dodge traffic and the cops.

"Excuse me! It's not my fault that the cops decided to chase you after you stopped that robber. Give me a few minutes..." the voice said through a speaker.

C.J.'s Corvette continued to sped down Virginia ave. The GPS beeped loudly. C.J. turned his head to look.

"Sh*t! Of all the times for the Reno traffic department to tear up the streets..." C.J. thought to himself.

C.J. pressed a few buttons on the GPS. The GPS displayed a overview of the area with several alternate roads to go.

"Which way to go?"

The routes were basically left, right and straight ahead to through the construction crew.

'Damned if I do...' C.J. thought to himself as he pressed a button on the dashboard.

"Please tell me that the nitro has been installed, man..."

"Uh...yea, but it hasn't't tell me..." the voice over the speaker said.

"It's either that or the cops..." C.J. as he pressed a button on the steering wheel.

Two huge flames blasted out of the Corvette's tail pipe and the Corvette seemed to blast forward at a incredibly amount of speed.

'Now I know how Jay felt first time in the LTD...' C.J. thought as he was pushed back in the seat.

The Corvette continued to speed forward towards the construction site. It launched itself using a piece of old road. The Corvette seemed to fly over the site and over to the other side. The Corvette landed with a big thud and its tires blew out.

'Shit...gotta work on my landings...' C.J. thought to himself as he continue to hit the gas.

The Corvette continued to run albeit kinda of shaky, but C.J. was away from the cops.

'Now let's headed back to the garage and see if Joe can fix this. He's gonna be pissed...' C.J. sad as he drove towards what looked like an empty garage...

To be Continued...

(Told ya I was working on it...)

Thanks for reading.



Anonymous said...

we need to care about the character. number 1. number 2, we need a context/ background story to get into. something to sink our teeth into. not just a flying chase scene from outta the blue, in reguards to nothing....nobody said this creative writing stuff was easy. if it was so easy, any monkeyman could get on and do it...but hey it's one thing to do something, and another thing to do something well.

avideogameplayer said...

Well, I don't see you writing a blog or anything like that, Ms. Anoymous.

Sheesh! Everyone is a critic...

Blast from the posting past